I think the fates are trying to tell me something. PREPARE MY QUERY LETTER!
I found these links out of the blue *g* today. Hope they help you.
One of my favorite sites and one I plan on using in the very near future is query shark. The blogger has some really awesome suggestions for that 'punch' line to reel in an agent/publisher, along with some examples. I think you'll enjoy this. I did.
Writer's Digest has a list of do's and don't for query letters. It's got some good suggestions, too.
A webinar is scheduled for query letters. Information is here.
Life is a query.